One of the Best (General) Summer League Rundowns You'll Ever Read

The quirky, peculiar Randolph came into the menacing, overbearing league as an opaque-turquoise candy dish of disparate and conflicting talents, but he’s graduated from banal curiosity to a sweet, but not saccharine crackerjack.

Randolph deserved it most, but I have a feeling the combination of missing one of the games and being a 2nd year player counted against him.

Well enough to make people salivate over him. But those talents weren’t congealed into a whole player when he was drafted. He had bits and pieces that people liked, but it looked like an utterly unusable talent combination. Interesting to look at, but not good for much else. But now, it looks like all of those things are coming together in one snappy package.

That’s what I got from Arnovitz’s sample sentence. Only he said it with much sharper and vivid imagery and in fewer words. That is hands down good writing. Infinitely better than all the LOL’s and all the other acronymous writing in the world could possibly hope to emulate.