Sonnets Down The Stretch #1
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Do we know how little we know about tomorrow
which happens to be February nineteenth,
the last day to trade in the NBA?
That knowledge is a problem like the view
from the foot of one of several volcanoes.
At home one can always wonder what
about is not home. The volcanoes always think
through vents or altogether beneath detection.
There is also a major employer from the middle
ages still reclining in her office,
smiling as though a private joke has flown
through the incredible view; even her
credulity is strained not at the rumors
but the very possibilities.
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Wonderful work!
I’ve been a little lax on my end lately. I need to pick up my end after this.
Definitely worth that +1.
I will miss Raef LaFrentz and (insert name[s] here).
by T Darkstar on Feb 18, 2009 8:59 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
I wanna flag it...
but only becuase I’m dumb.
darkstars a good judge of …? poetry? so….I’ll take his word for it. and start….reading more.
in the mean time. +1 for making me seriously reconsider my brain powers akido skills. :)
The Faith don't panic, the faith freaks out burns out farms and torchs small villages in the name of The Faith.
by faith on Feb 18, 2009 9:36 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
Ha!
I just flagged you because I’m dumb! What do you think about that?
I like whatever metric makes a Blazer look better.
by einman77 on Feb 18, 2009 10:08 PM PST up reply actions 0 recs
I think that sadder things have happened to sadder sacks in this world,
but if it must be….let it be me…..let it be me….
some think that life can’t kick down to the dumb and full of too much rum……
but if it must be ….let it be me…..let it be me…
…k that’s my poetic kick for the day….and it sucks….
so… I think that your flag may have been appropriate.
The Faith don't panic, the faith freaks out burns out farms and torchs small villages in the name of The Faith.
by faith on Feb 19, 2009 7:26 AM PST up reply actions 0 recs
Actually I didn't flag you
I didn’t want to waste D&B’s time with my immaturity. But I thought about it.
I like whatever metric makes a Blazer look better.
by einman77 on Feb 19, 2009 7:03 PM PST up reply actions 0 recs
good as ever
I always seem to find myself adding a rec at the end of your work, good sir Bayno.
by abdelnaby on Feb 18, 2009 9:41 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
TRADE SERGIO FREE BAYLESS
great work, just had to get that out
by blackandwite323 on Feb 18, 2009 10:29 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
So... what I think you're saying....
is that, deep down, we all just wanna be loved. Is that it?
(With apologies to the late Douglas Adams)
"You are never (fanatically) dedicated to something you have complete confidence in." Robert Pirsig
by -ken on Feb 19, 2009 9:44 AM PST reply actions 0 recs

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