Homage to Mister Rodriguez, a fragment
I've had an intuition that Sergio will be with the team for a long time--even though there are many sound arguments for trading him.
Since he's seen more minutes the past couple of nights, and so far as I know he wasn't traded today, I thought now might be a good time to post a fragment of a poem I've been writing on the subject.
Homage to Mister Rodriguez
[1]
The Sergeant your coach yelled so long
moved you not, restless, waiting for whom? Still,
you are a patient man.—
I seem to see you pass here still:
Fernandez, Batum, in moments odd you dished
before a firecat, bright eyes on the halftime
entertainment, all the children still.
‘Fernandez ...’ Fernandez will look while you read a t-shirt.
[2]
Outside the Northwest winters in grim dark
grey air lashing high thro’ the virgin condos
raccoons in windows crawl,
surely the Spanish heart repels, nonplussed.
I doubt if Fernandez than this cast, that sky,
spares from his discourse on you’re a/t ratio
more. We are on each other’s teams
who care. Both of our worlds drafted us. Stand lush,
[3]
thy eyes look to me harsh. Out of tamales & air
your game’s made, and moves. I summarize, see,
from the youtubes it.
I think you will stay. Why do we
linger, diminished, in our friends’ air,
implicitly visible, to whom, a season,
seasons, over off-seasons; or not;
to a big prospect; or not; shimmer & materialize.
[4]
Jaw-dropt, rise with its rationale, mending then;
then not. When the zone collapses, who misses it?
Your coach never quieted,
Fernandez ah two seasons past you—
svelte & eastward staring on a smooth deck
it seems I describe you, mature. I leave to check,
I leave to stay online,
and the Sergeant, & Monty, & Fernandez, & the huddled men.
[5]
By the week we embarked we were, most, warmed up.
Strange teams across us, after a fortnight’s practice
fortuitous, endeared us;
skin-prickly warm, dry, peckish; so were well
many as one month we could have all time-outs;
screens, quelled; a firstborn child kennelled; water
crowding & falling: unwaiting.
And the season itself he leapt acourt young Brandon Roy
[6]
(delivered from the clouds; because he lost
off their hotel rooms, round-eyed, a multivalent gunboat
across a mountain river,
that water clouded dark & briny
& broad, all of the other men could fly
and the factory’s tertiary investment up to him,
sloughed off on a bad day
soft on the ignoble feasting of thanksgiving) breathing…
[52]
They say thro’ the fading fall Prizbylla thrives,
your second, who than you bore more rebounds;
and I describe him unburied. I move on.
Seaborn…
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man
St. Bayno the Great
what post of mine could follow?
my own prose, far short
my own words, silent after
may this rec speak in my stead.
by abdelnaby on Nov 20, 2008 10:02 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
Nice
What are you? A Norse bard?
(It’s actually some of the most seriously good poetry I’ve seen on this board, but this is what you chose to use that talent on?)
Anyway, we’ve all always loved Sergio, but just like we ignore those people who make snap judgements when Sergio has a few terrible games, we’ll have to ignore these last few unless he makes it a habit.
Grim and bloodied, the Blake must leave this battle for a time,
But what ill wind is this?
For in his wake a new hero appears:
Sergio! A beast who feeds on chaos and his enemies’ fears!
by staylost on Nov 20, 2008 10:08 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
That´s great.
Sergio + Rudy = 16
Sergio + Bayless = 16
Batum 8+8=16
by amlmart1 on Nov 21, 2008 1:11 PM PST reply actions 0 recs
Well done
Mingling before free throws,
Sergio stares up, beyond Oden’s chin
and beyond the empty expensive seats,
to the box of Heaven, which displays
the last play
in the slow motion
that mimics the way he feels
and has felt
all those minutes
on the bench.
Sergio is at a party.
He has been invited, and he wears the right clothes.
Still, he wanders awkwardly with a non-alcoholic beverage
and stares at the art on the walls
until the whistle blows
and still life starts moving.
by hattie on Dec 10, 2008 10:23 AM PST reply actions 0 recs

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